Having the 'this player came out strong' at the top of a 'move' gives away what's going to happen in that move. Putting whether they came out with a strong/weak outcome at the bottom would make reading other stories more enjoyable.

Having a more book-like form of the story for people casually reading would be nice as well. (Where the chapters flow together instead of disconnected by 'moves'). Seeing the separate 'moves' is only helpful for the narrator and possibly the players.